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Kassie Madness's avatar

Lol wow I love this especially the ending part 😂

Katrina C's avatar

Great read! I like the real world twist on the mythical succubus.

Maria Matic's avatar

Lucky are those who have avoided the grip of a Succubus. Beautifully written!

Hawwaa’s tiny world🫧's avatar

This was gripping,I loved how you blended myth with real-life stories, showing the Succubus as both a metaphor and a destructive force that drains men of their lives.

nooneway's avatar

i’m sorry about your brother. it feels wrong to say how well written this is but it is. it’s so descriptive that it made me feel uncomfortable; its creepy but well done!

Kushagra Shah's avatar

I didn't knew what a succubus was? So thanks for a informing...

Through The Meat Grinder's avatar

Be grateful if you haven’t met one!